Ohhh what a sad piece! u had a great imagery and ur work was very creative! the structures such great even the emotions seems so deep and sincere, keep it up 5/5

well done

Oh, yes, this one says so much. I've have some of these lines go through my from time to time, on a more personal level. Good emotion.

Wow! i really like this poem.. full of pure emotions.. anyone can relate to it..5/5

Wow. really beautiful poem. Expressed really well and it flowed really well.
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Taegan Emily

Wow this is god dam amazing message me! i got a feelin ya a little like me maybe we will get on? email me if yew want this my email

craziiicloe@hotmail.co.uk

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amzing poet dont ever stop

Im speechless this poem was amazing