Ky... this poem was so sad. I mean, it was good, full of love, but the emotion I felt whenever I read this was saddness. I think the right title for this would be "Love You When I'm Gone" or something like that. It was very sweet and had a very nice flow. Keep it up darling. 5/5 <3 <3 <3

~Kayla~

Hey i was wondering if u still needed a title for your poem. man I was liking the poem. I was thinking of maybe TORN. even if u never mentioned the worn, it is the definition of the poem. u were torn between allowing him to stay and continue to hurt u r just let him leave and still continue to hurt u.