That last line was SOOO good.

And when I fell down off of the edge, you had better places to be.]

WOW! That was great. I mean, it's common for poets to say that the person they loved didn't catch them when they fell, but you took it to a whole new level. You said just that, without saying it! It was great. I loved the original take on it. Your work is always soo good.
*ME*