How sad!............great job!
***aLy***

I like how you ended the poem with your title, it wrapped everything up together. Good job, I would like to see more imagery that appeals to the senses next time like

"Forgetting myself--
Trapped in orbs entwined
of horrible memories
haunting my frail mind"

With your potential, I would like to see some truly raw, free-flowing, non-rhyming poems. :)

This poem is so short but so strong.. i've felt this way before so i know exactly what you're talking about.

i really like this one. 5/5 from me =]

This is absolutely fantastic..Written with deep thoughts and portrayed a great picture of your emotions..I loved every words you used in it..Sadness was expressed through your great vocabs..Fantastic..great job and keep writing..