Pretty good poem. Make sure you check your spelling just makes it look neater

Very strong
but it hurts

First of all you need to work on your spelling and punctuation. It just makes your work look neater and it's just easier to read.

Also your poem starts out kind of rhyming and then you stop and start. It makes the piece hard to follow and it seems very choppy. So maybe you could fix that up and try to make it a bit more structurally sound.

As for the message of the poem I think it's very strong. But the spelling and punctuation errors kind of cover that up and drag the whole poem down.

But I think this poem is really very good otherwise and it deserves a 5/5 for the amount of emotion and everything else that you have put into this poem. Great job. Kepp it up.