Lots of hate.
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Who dya hate? Me?

I couldn't really see this as a poem but more as a rant in the forums. You seem to have the same problem I had when I started writing. Try to expand your vocabulary a little more. Use this site, www.rhymezone.com

even though it doesnt flow naturally, sometimes find a more educated word for another can make a poem seem less 3rd grade english lit, and more to a high school/contest worthy poem.

Although the poem is a good idea. Try to fit this into a poem, or convert it into some type of freeverse and i'm sure this poem will be amazing.