Lol definitely odd... i like your wriiting style though... youre fair good with rhyming words lol nice nice

This is really intreuging!! like one of your other comments it reminds me of alice in wonderland but it also reminds me of like the garden of eden and eve and everything. really good! 5/5

Fantasy abounds here but that is OK - for what would a poet do without some craziness ?? I have to say that I really like your poem. I think that the nature section of this site has to be where one can find really wonderfully written poems. They arent old and dull like so may other love poems. Im sure mine fall into that category once in awhile. I found your work very interesting. Keep up the good words and may all your writings bring you peace.