Oh that was so sweet and very sincere! i can see the sincerity and the great emotions. and it was totally well expressed! great describing about ur bestfriend 5/5

I like the simplicity of this piece, as well as the heart felt emotions you've expressed. I think it's good that it's not too long, four to six stanzas is usually a good amount. I especially liked the last line, very heart warmiing.

Brad

Aw, such a beautiful poem. The flow is a bit rocky though, but it's nice. I loved it! 5/5

.:CiNdY:.

This is a very sweet poem. i dont even have words to describe it. but nothing is wrong with this. i love it!!

This is really good. this sounds just like how how i feel about my best friend. keep up the good work i cant wait to see how you write when you take your time.

-Nicole