Lost

by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA   Jan 5, 2008


She's just a young little girl
With only 16 years of age.
She has nowhere to run to,
Except to the arms of a strange man.

She could of have the world,
But instead chose the life she has.
With the look she gives them,
She can make a man do anything.

She lives her lonely life,
Full of deep fear,
No one can stop her,
With the awful mistakes she does.

Now her looks have gone away,
And nobody wants her anymore.
She should've stayed at home,
But now she's just a lost little girl.

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  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    I like this piece... Good topic and written in a good way. Deep poem, very touching.
    My favorite stanza is:

    -She's just a young little girl
    With only 16 years of age.
    She has nowhere to run to,
    Except to the arms of a strange man.-

    You created good flow in every stanza.

    Keep writing!

  • 16 years ago

    by HidinVictim

    So pretty, and so powerful... i'm jealous you are such a great writter, this has alot of different messages depending on how the poems interpreted (sp?) very good... 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by crystaljean88

    Aww, so sad! this is exactly how i hope my daughter dont feel.. this is such a heartfelt poem

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