Wow, wow, wow...
This is one of the most amazing friendship poems I've read in a while...
Whole piece is excellent, written with amount of heartfelt emotions. Your descriptions are vivid, beautiful, and the whole piece has great flow and wording.
Deeply touching, original piece, truly captivating
from the first to the last line.
I can't choose my favorite stanza, whole poem is truly great.
You did really good job with rhymes, too.