You captivate me.
Your gaze makes me audacious.
Your pupils challege me; keep looking.
With fickle clarity, I relish these corrosive moments.
So foolishly am I flattered by your eccentricities.
Your sedative cadence soothes my most persistent panic,
And yet, your eyes leave questions, and I
Absorb your cluttered thoughts.
So opportune, our friendship seems;
A catalyst for luck.
Wow...
I love this piece from the beginning to the end. I like your choice of words and truly effective, captivating descriptions. Whole poem is greatly written and emotions are excellently expressed. Absolutely amazing piece!
Original and refreshing.
Keep writing!
5/5 from me