Dont you see?

by xoxkatrinaxox   Jan 5, 2008


I have nothing to say to you. No fake words
to try to make you stay.

I know it is the best for you,but as youre little sister
I need you too. Dont you see that you are leaving
me because of the mistakes you made?

I dont know if I can watch you go out that door
again, pretending I dont care! I wasnt made
to be alone.

sissy dont you see how attached I am to you?
How I need youre advice and youre love
to get me through my life!!

Maybe I shouldnt care because this is about
you, and not me but do you understand
that I am going through a hard time too?
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i am not sure about this i just wrote it. my sister is moving again and i need her more then she knows tell me what u think. ty

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  • 16 years ago

    by Curing the Comon Cliche

    I like it. It has allot of emotion in it. Plz comment on one of mine.

  • 16 years ago

    by Bekka Smekka

    This poem is so sad and i think i like it becuase i can relate to it. my twin sister died two years ago and i still can't move on. thanx for writing this.

  • 16 years ago

    by damont

    This is a good poem well expressed and even though you wrote it short notice its still good. keep writing

  • 16 years ago

    by missy

    Very expressive poem toward your sister i hope she can see clearly how much you need her at the moment and what a wonderful sister you are to care so much.

  • 16 years ago

    by victoria

    I think it is a great poem.

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