Comments : He took her life

  • 16 years ago

    by tori anningfield

    I like it, but then I don't.
    If you wrote it in for like

    shdoisadisdf
    skjfhoisaghiras
    hoisadghisdjf
    soidhoisdf

    Instead of paragraph form, it might
    come together more easily.
    Just a personal opinon.

  • 16 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    You did a good job
    =]
    Nice work

  • 16 years ago

    by TwistedAngel xx

    I agree with tori
    its hard to read when its all together
    but i did read it and did like it
    good work
    xx