Comments : The Moment I Said It

  • 16 years ago

    by FlawlesslyTarnished

    The first two stanzas can describe me so well.
    [just i never told the kid i loved him]
    but still, a beautiful poem.
    i liked the idea of it. :] and the wording too.
    i really like this piece. another great write. 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by crystaljean88

    This poem was a very happy love poem. it kept my intrest through the whole thing. the flow seemed a bit off, but other than that it was great. i still rate it a 5 tho :)

  • 16 years ago

    by HidinVictim

    Such a happy ending, very pretty, but you might try changing

    It was in that dark, stary night
    to
    It was on that dark, stary night
    the poem might flow better.