by Im So OVER IT Jan 6, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
first love
I remember that night |
by Brendan
Very nice. Perhaps making each line a sentence would tidy things up a bit. And maybe using "because" instead of "cuz". But it's very good, job well done. |
by ashley
Its really good =] |
by jLegendc
I've never read a poem that doesn't rhyme nor doesn't hav a flow.. but this is really good.. it comes straight to the point... well done =] |