My Promise to You

by Im So OVER IT   Jan 6, 2008


I remember that night
We talked on the phone
for the first time. You and
I it felt right. You said you
would not cheat or hurt me
too deep. You always said
this is My promise to you.

later on. You told me
you loved me. And that I was
everything. You even said to
not be scarred cuz you wouldnt
leave. You always said This is MY
Promise to you.

I get a call. You sound so broken
like something was wrong. You
did what I never would expect.
You broke every Promise.

Im sorry but I have to Move on.
Maybe someday we'll meet up
in this world. When everything
heals up. But deep down I will
always love you. This is My Promise
to you...

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  • 16 years ago

    by Brendan

    Very nice. Perhaps making each line a sentence would tidy things up a bit. And maybe using "because" instead of "cuz". But it's very good, job well done.

  • 16 years ago

    by ashley

    Its really good =]

  • 16 years ago

    by jLegendc

    I've never read a poem that doesn't rhyme nor doesn't hav a flow.. but this is really good.. it comes straight to the point... well done =]