Love Will Make You Crazy

by HidinVictim   Jan 6, 2008


You fell in love with a girl
She didn't care at all
Then you cut your wrist
In hopes that you would fall
I'm screaming out in pain now
Cause those cuts are me
Thats my heart shes holding
Its my heart that bleeds,
Thats my wrist your slashing
I'm dashing in the salt
So i can feel your pain
I love you more than anything
And its driving me insane.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    This was good, i liked it, though it hit me deep and i can relate. i guess its saying that cutting yourself hurts people around you, and that hit home for me.
    but a good write none the less

  • 16 years ago

    by My Mistakes

    I like how this story tells about hurting yourself for someone you love. alotta mina are like this. very good 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Mike Martin

    This is very deep! I love it. You put alot of feeling in it and made me want more...xoxo

  • 16 years ago

    by YourThe ReasonIDiedTonight

    Wow this poem kind of freaked me out but in a good way because it was so up front/straight to the point. It gave me goosebumps and i could relate to it so much

    nice job sweetheart 5/5 keep it up

  • 16 years ago

    by Alexandra Jade Brewer

    This was a very powerful poem! So much emotion, and the message was clear and sad. It was simple... short but help so much emotion. I like your choice of words as well! Keep up the amazing work!