I loved how this was short and yet so meaningful. The flow was flawless and the emotions were oh so real. The imagery just drew me in and kept me interested from beginning to end. Well done, I really enjoyed it. *5/5*

This was a pretty good poem. But the flow seemed a bit rocky. Around the middle of the poem, it seemed kind of confusing. Maybe if you put it into stanzas or adding punctuation, it would look perfect. Overall, it seemed like a good poem. Good job!

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A very emotional piece. And i think that many people can relate to this poem. From start to finish, this was a great eye catching poem. :] the flow was simply flawless and the end was simply amazing. :] i know exactly what this is like and it really does suck. "/ a great write. 5/5.

Wow that was true and very worded...although its not long enough but it really means a lot! honestly i felt hurt coz some of few lines was related to me... huh huh huh,, great one 5/5

This was a very powerful poem! So much emotion, and the message was clear and sad. It was simple... short but help so much emotion. I like your choice of words as well! Keep up the amazing work!

Wow this poem kind of freaked me out but in a good way because it was so up front/straight to the point. It gave me goosebumps and i could relate to it so much

nice job sweetheart 5/5 keep it up

This is very deep! I love it. You put alot of feeling in it and made me want more...xoxo

I like how this story tells about hurting yourself for someone you love. alotta mina are like this. very good 5/5

This was good, i liked it, though it hit me deep and i can relate. i guess its saying that cutting yourself hurts people around you, and that hit home for me.
but a good write none the less