You really can put great emotion into your poetry.
I think the only thing you can with this is capitalize the things that need to me and spell out all those words (u to you) It might not seem that big of a deal. But there are really anal people out there who will rate you lower for that (if you care). It also goes to show that you not only care how it comes out.. but how it looks.

Excellent Poem

5/5

Propa deep love it 1 of my fav 1s of urs x

Great poem