by v3nganc3 Jan 6, 2008
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
Today i want to do green things |
by Mister 47
Well , i dont hope to be ude , but ti seem soo strange for me , i could not follow the meaning a lot from green to red and what dose the title of vampire point too here, second the rhyming is not soo, god and neither the structure of paragraph i hope you fix it i like to read it again someday , !!i think it havea good unusual subejct that atract me from teh title |