Broken Family

This poem is very sad
i dont know what its like to be in this situation
so i'm not going to act like I know

all i have to say is, keep your head up high and love your baby with all your heart. if God or fate or whatever it is that controls what happens to us wants this to happen...it'll happen. who knows maybe there is an ever better step daddy in your future

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I am very sorry for the sadness and trouble you are, or were going through, i know that it can be tough, but dont blame yourself for his mistake, i am sure you are an amazing person, as is your daughter, and its his lose. But the poem itself was again amazing, you never seem to lack anything in any of your writing, 5/5

Awww.. i know da feelin.. my mom and dad always fought.. my dad cheated but my mom still forgave him.. well i really hope that you will reconcile with your husband.. 5/5...

Wow. I got chills from reading this poem, the good chills though. I really hope that you are able to pull through this little predicament. Good luck to you and your daughter.

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This was a good poem... just remember that not all poems have to rhyme it is better to have a poem that doesnt rhyme then to have forced rhymes. it was a very good poem though.