Beautiful poem. sweet and cute, too. :]
i really like it. a lot of truth in this piece.
and the emotion was captured very nicely.
another great write. :] 5/5.

Oh what is it? hmm just trying to figure out about the titled of this poem.. but the message seems so lovely and beautiful.. great job 5/5

So sweet and beautiful love piece, filled with greatly expressed feelings. This is my favorite poem from you, it is fantastically written and it has great and meaningful message. I like the descriptions- the imagery is very vivid from the beginning to the end, and whole idea for this poem is interesting and good.

Keep writing!

I loved the beginning! It really captured my attention. But the last stanza was a bit weak and I think you could improve it. Overall great poem *5/5*

Your description of love is amazing, you are an amazing poem. i loved the first stanza, it was so perfect, it was uncanny.

5/5 david

Too bad all guys arent like this right??
amazing and beautifull expressed. i totally pictured a guy running in the rain to come see me!
5/5