The title was wonderful, but the poem itself... wow! It actually took my breath away. It was very good, I fell in love with it. Your flow was good and I loved your choice of words. I can relate to this piece 100%. I thought about my boyfriend and the first time I saw him whenever I read this. It was so sweet, keep it up darling! 5/5 <3 <3 <3

~Kayla~

Woah! This was well written and very desciptive. I enjoyed reading it. U seem in love.

[[applause]] great job! keep it up 5/5!