10 Days Gone To Long

by Alexandra Jade Brewer   Jan 6, 2008


I'm finding it hard to believe
That it's only been two days
Time I've spent without your voice
Wishing into your eyes I could gaze

You have got me completely trapped
Within each beat of your heart
I love so much the man I fell for
That I can't stand when we're apart

I know that soon you will return
And I wish you never left my sight
I will hold you in my arms
Because everything is finally right

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  • 16 years ago

    by HidinVictim

    Pretty, i definatly like it, this is short and to the point... i love the title, and the first two lines... 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by BrixGoesxRawr

    That I can't stand when were apart [we're*]

    This was very lovely & beautiful. A pretty good flow. But, it could be better. I think you could go into more detail, make it have some more imagery!

    But, still. it was good and I enjoyed reading it!

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