Hey, I really like this. However, being a lyricist myself, that's to be expected :P. I would love to hear the melody behind it though, whether it's faster or slower. Especially because, if it's faster (or just not too slow) then I would have to vote for 'not finished' because most songs have a third verse that changes up a little. It's what keeps the listener tuned into the song, and not bored. Anyone singing along, gets a chance to sing to another melody or another key. So if this song isn't already long enough to be a song, I'd say you'd want a part like that. Keep your song always sounding fresh, even after the fourth time on repeat.
Great job though. Especially for your age. You impress me. :)