Wow...
This is truly amazing, excellently written. Whole poem has great, fantastically created atmosphere. I like the choice of words, emotions are expressed in a great way in every stanza. Whole poem is breathtaking and I can relate to it in a way.
Deep piece...
I can't chose my favorite part, whole piece is absolutely amazing.
Keep up!

"I don't know how to put these in words,
I don't know if I should,
There are things I hold,
But I don't know if it's time to be told..."

Im not sure that i really understand this stanza

"Everyday I make decisions,
I hope that it'll not turn out to be a cloud of illusion,
NOw this is my revelation,
It's true that you have become my passion..."

This part ^^ is just WOW, its very powerful and the words are so expressive. VERY vERY good, i liked it alot.

a well deserved

5/5