Dude!!! absolutely love the "cliche" line.. you rock baby doll!!! this is really one of my favorite poems you've wrote!!! i love you!!

I love how strong your message comes out & the syntax & how you rhymed the last two line in each stanza. it doesnt exactly flow but in that manner conveys the abrassiveness of the message. good job

YOU WERE RIGHT
I LOVE IT!!!
:D

That was SOOOOO true.. Very GOOD

This one is so true about guys in general
no matter how sweet
no matter what they say the will do
or wont