This is very beautiful and creative Jaime. The flow was good, except it was a little shaky in the second stanza. I think you need to reword it a little or take some words out that you really don't need so that you can tighten it up a little. Other than that, I say that it's perfect. Creativity is a major plus when writing poetry, so is the flow, and the concept; which by the way was great also. You are an excellent writer and I look forward to working with you.

Aww, I love it. I felt this exact same way on new years eve, and I've been doing better with my life. I think everyone should look at the new year like that, if they did the world would be a so much better place. The flow was very nice, and I liked how you used the word "Blondie" hehe. Greay job!

Keep writing!
Cayce

Beautiful, encouraging, and promising...
please keep writing ...

A very nice poem, and a very nice message. By the way, you may not remember me, but we've exchanged comments in the past, good comments by the way, lol.

I think the first and third stanzas were my favorites, though it was all great. Good flow, good words, good rhymes, good structure and a good message (all be it toyourself, but a good message none the less, lol).

Brad