Aw. Well, this is pretty personal which makes it a bit hard to criticize but, the flow was a bit rocky.. It could've been better. But, the emotions were amazing. And I'm sure this is something everyone can relate to. People change all the time;; Sometimes for the better && sometimes for the worst.
It had so much feeling here, and I could really feel your pain!

Good job, hun.

I guess are friendship wasn't meant to be [are=our*]

I loved the poem great wording and the feeling of the poem was perfect great job!!!

Aww. This story is sad. I can truly relate and it sucks. Friendship poems are not normally my preference but I decided to read this one and am glad I did. Great job hun :]]

Most everyone has been through this before. Sadly it seems as if it is part of growing up. I can truely relate to it since this happened between me and my old best friend as well. I think the word choice could have been a little better but other than that its a nice piece of work. 5/5

Signed,
Alexander

I can relate to this too! it always sucks losing a best friend, especially to a someone else. but no matter what you'll always be there for them

5/5

This is a great poem you really put heart into it.
i kind of feel the same way i had a freind like
that too... it's nice to kno that i'm not the only one thats in that situation.

This is a great poem you really put heart into it.
i kind of feel the same way i had a freind like
that too... it's nice to kno that i'm not the only one thats in that situation.