Kill Yourself.

by Teria   Jan 7, 2008


Kill Yourself.

Sing me lullabies that I've never heard,
and rock me to sleep as if I were four.
Teach me the ways my mom never could,
and hold my hand if you so kindly would.

Wipe my tears from your gorgeous eyes,
and cling to me almost too tightly every night.
Tuck me in before you lay yourself down,
but don't you forget to smile instead of frown.

Shower me with gifts of mercy and love,
along with the faith I've never had for myself.
Then burn yourself with your own offerings,
in order to Kill Yourself and all other belongings.

Don't leave me behind with nothing left,
take me with you, this will be last thing I beg
You can give me the world and so much more,
but you have to remember, and never forget. . .
we're pretending that I am only four.

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  • 16 years ago

    by crystaljean88

    Wow, this poem was very dificult for me to read jus because i could picture this., very dramatic. loved it

  • 16 years ago

    by BleedingAngel

    Ohh wow, left me speechless =0( love this poem especially the ending, made me longing to be a little girl again, when everything was so easy....Lige gets tough as you get older =0(

    Starting the poem with lullabies, made me long for my mom and the time she use to sing for me when I was very little =0)

    Love Sabbi

  • 16 years ago

    by Riley

    Hmmm, there's something off about flow here it seems. It's just that I have to reread a few lines to make it fit in.

    I like the general idea of the poem, and you stuck to one expression, which is good ;)

  • 16 years ago

    by Not

    I like your poem,I wish i can find somebody like that.My relationships haven't been as great but im glad that you have someone and that person should be glad that they have a wonderful poem made written for them....great job....love always..xoxo!!...=)

  • 16 years ago

    by Poetic Ninja aka Papachopchop

    What was your inspiration for this one? Just curious. Very good but I could understand better if I had some background better? 5/5 anyways ;)

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