Hmm..not a poem almost a story. Hehe. I Love the title. Lol. :]]

So, I must say the line below is amazing. Although I have no idea what you are referring to, there are a million and one things I can think of.

"With lines drawn together, instead of in half"

Wow, I always do my comments as I read and now I realize why you titled it rawr. Greatttttt thing btw.

"Dinosaurs can rule the world we live in, since it's less chaotic than filled with sin. They can sing us songs, the chorus being "rawr" and remind us all of who we are.

I loved that stanza or whatever you would like to call it. The dinosaur incorparation[sp] is wonderful it really gives the reader something to chew on for a while...

This line did not quite click with me. The would could change thing really threw me off the bus. Also the ever even tried kindof threw the flow off.
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The would could change in the blink of an eye, and we'd all forget why we ever even tried.

Omgg. In reference to the stanza below. Lol. I lovee itt. There is a different twist to it. && itsamazing!

We can dream our dreams that's not worth dreaming. And, fill the holes not worth seaming. We can do the the rhymes and spend our time, wasted on our couch pretending to be fine.

I liked the ending, with the repitition of the stanza. Adds a little something. So yeah, overall the poem/story was a new twist for you[I am guessing] and I liked it. You managed to keep your flow smooth and your rhyme was consistant. The ideas were jummbled but it made the whole peice great. Great job hun. 5.5

Amber :]]