This one has so much truth behind it. I can relate to it in many ways. You are a very good writer, keep up the great work. :)

A beautiful and heart felt write. something
about reading this poem made my heart
jump. i really like it. and the first stanza was
simply amazing. alot of meaning and truth in
this piece. :] And I like how you ended this.
very powerful, very strong. Again, the emotion
was portrayed very strongly and deeply. and
again, the wording was simply amazing.
another great write. :] 5/5.

Wow...
Amazing piece, truly excellently written from the beginning to the end.
The flow is flawless in every stanza. I like the topic a lot, you managed to write very original yet emotional piece. Whole poem is deeply touching.
My favorite stanza is:

-Follow your heart,
and touch your soul.
But, don't go too far,
to fill what's empty.
You'll reach the sky,
and fall back down -
if you push too hard.-
^^^
Effective beginning. It pulled me straight into the poem.
You created eery atmosphere through the piece.
Greatly done!

Well the flow was a bit rocky, but it was a really great poem. Very well written, and the imagery somewhat fit. Good job though.

.:CiNdY:.

So far this is my fav poem.. i rlly like this alot. i rlly do