Wow. Wow. Wow. Okay, so I'm stunned. You've taken something not so unique and twisted it around and made it unique. I love it. Screams that there is just something wrong with the way things play out sometimes and how we just condition children into being almost non-human, at least that's what it says to me. It's a very good poem. :D 5/5

Much Love,
.:Danielle:.