Confused

by Ashleigh   Jan 7, 2008


I love you so much it hurts,
And I don't know what to do.
All these doubts I have,
But I can't stop loving you.

I really want to be with you,
But I'm confused with how you feel.
I've been heartbroken many times,
And I no longer know what's real.

I just need to know right now,
Will I ever be your girlfriend?
If you love me like you say you do,
Then you'll be with me until the end.

*please let me know any changes I can make before i give this to the guy I love*

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  • 16 years ago

    by FlawlesslyTarnished

    Personally, I think this poem is perfect the way it is. :] This was a beautiful write and I could really feel the emotions you were placing in writing this piece. a great write. 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by lish

    Wow this poem is brilliant, its got all the right words, straight to the point, i love it

    xxo

  • 16 years ago

    by Alexandra Jade Brewer

    I think this is a great poem! The flow is awesome, and your message is very clear. About giving it to the guy you love, if I were to give my boyfriend a poem I wouldnt state that he has to stay with you forever... I dont know if you guys are dating, and if you are how long you have been dating for, but at this age its alittle much. Just because you have so much more to go through university and everything. That could make it seem really final and scare him off. Just my opinion, so I would write a poem, about how much you love and care about him, and leave it at that for now.
    Don't worry though you dont have to listen to me just a suggestion and I hope it works out for you :)

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