Your all that i've got

by xxTaegan Emilyxx   Jan 7, 2008


What are you hiding from me?
Why can't we be alone?
Why don't you want me there?
When no one else is home?

Who is really at your house?
Why cant i come and stay?
You jump down my throat when i ask,
Have you gone astray?

You aren't as open as you were,
With all your secrets and lies,
Every time you tell me no,
Another part of me dies.

Your never where you say you are,
And your excuses never end,
I never see you not at work,
Mixed messages you send.

You coming to see me,
Seems like such a chore,
But i rarely ever see you,
I need to see you more,

Do you have another girl,
In your arms at night,
For your affections,
I feel i have to fight.

I'm losing my way,
I feel so uninspired,
These feelings in my head,
are making me sick and tired.

You promised me forever,
Said you'll always be there,
Did you change your mind?
Or never really cared?

I cant prove your doing me wrong,
But your not showing me your not,
My pain wont subside,
Because you're all that I've got.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Hawaiizang3l

    I know how you feel love..or at least i did know how you feel now. Sucks lots...
    Very sad write...love the rhyming & the flow was good & constant! i like the last line lots, probably why you choose it as your title. :)

    Keep it up --n-- Take care!!

  • 16 years ago

    by xXxemzxXx

    This is a great poem it shows great emotion and feeling i love it your word choice and everything 5/5

    --emz--

  • 16 years ago

    by Erin

    Wow! I loved it!5/5 check out some of mine if you'd like

  • 16 years ago

    by Pete

    The first thing that hits me is how unbelievably crammed with emotion this piece is, it screams out at the reader .. forcing you to feel what the author is feeling. You did a very nice job portraying that.

    I really like the way that the first two stanzas are predominantly questions, I think it sets the scene nicely, really lets the reader see into the subjects state of mind.

    I felt that your flow was really steady, right up until the very last stanza - then it faltered a touch. With a few really minor adjustments, you could maintain the flow of the poem.

    You may find alot of people slate a rhyme scheme based on simple words, I really like that in a poem. So long as the sentence the word is contained in can maintain my interest. This poem definitely did.

    Overall a very nice piece of work that appeals to anyone that has felt uncertain about their partners monogamy. Such a sad piece, (for the most part) really well written.

    ~Pete.

  • 16 years ago

    by Romancing the Darker Side

    I liked this poem a lot, and I think that a lot of people can relate to it, when they think a loved one is cheating on them. It was very easy to understand, so I think you could add in a metaphor or something to make it a bit more complex. I also liked how your rhyming didn't sound forced.
    The last stanza seemed to have a different flow than the others, maybe you could work on that?
    Nice poem,
    ~Ash

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