That was so sad... No one ever should have to face those feelings and alas we do. Whether it be loss of a relationship, or loss of friends/family. Its painful to live through. This poem captured that message so well!

I know exactly how it feels but what a relief coz ive lost him for good..

nice poem..5/5

Just tell him straight "why are you acting wierd?" it's either he is betraying you or has certain reasons but you have the right to know.there is no guy that doesn't want his girl inside his home when he is alone

it's a good poem, true feelings are insdie it

I see i have a fan :) and that poem was very good and it takes good writing discipline to keep every verse the same length.

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Very emotional piece! it was packed with good flow and rhyme and a strong message. It's sad to think someone isn't being faithful, and to not know for sure. I think sometimes a straight yes or no answer hurts less than not knowing at all. Good job!
*ME*

The flow of the whole piece is really good.
Every stanza holds many emotions and it is written in a good way. It has some typical rhymes but all in all, greatly done!

This poem is great.. you did an excellent job writing down your emotions and making it flow flawlessly.. I guess I really enjoyed this poem because I can relate to each and every line... I actually have written a lot of poems based on the same exact thing but I deleted them from the site since ive moved on.. hope you do too.. don't let any guy treat you bad... excellent job letting it out though.. keep it up and thanks for the comment =)

I enjoyed the flow of this poem nicely. It was well written and flowed smoothly which is the cause of a basic rhyme scheme. Your rhyme was typical and simple I think you could add a whole lost more to it if you used deeper words. The emotions written throughout this was beautifully sad however and boosted my thoughts on this poem up. Well done. Nice work. ~Mel

I liked this poem a lot, and I think that a lot of people can relate to it, when they think a loved one is cheating on them. It was very easy to understand, so I think you could add in a metaphor or something to make it a bit more complex. I also liked how your rhyming didn't sound forced.
The last stanza seemed to have a different flow than the others, maybe you could work on that?
Nice poem,
~Ash

The first thing that hits me is how unbelievably crammed with emotion this piece is, it screams out at the reader .. forcing you to feel what the author is feeling. You did a very nice job portraying that.

I really like the way that the first two stanzas are predominantly questions, I think it sets the scene nicely, really lets the reader see into the subjects state of mind.

I felt that your flow was really steady, right up until the very last stanza - then it faltered a touch. With a few really minor adjustments, you could maintain the flow of the poem.

You may find alot of people slate a rhyme scheme based on simple words, I really like that in a poem. So long as the sentence the word is contained in can maintain my interest. This poem definitely did.

Overall a very nice piece of work that appeals to anyone that has felt uncertain about their partners monogamy. Such a sad piece, (for the most part) really well written.

~Pete.

Wow! I loved it!5/5 check out some of mine if you'd like

This is a great poem it shows great emotion and feeling i love it your word choice and everything 5/5

--emz--

I know how you feel love..or at least i did know how you feel now. Sucks lots...
Very sad write...love the rhyming & the flow was good & constant! i like the last line lots, probably why you choose it as your title. :)

Keep it up --n-- Take care!!