Into the Blue

by Connor   Jan 7, 2008


This is a jigsaw poem that me and my friend did ( what happens is someone right down words and you try to use them in your poem)
The words I was given were:
widow, debris, cracked, rain, blue, fearful, sights, smiles, seven, and dwarfs
It was pretty hard.

As we stare into the blue
Remembering that fearful night
The widow in the creepy house
with the cracked windows
before the hurricane
Remembering the smiles before
ruined by sights of debris
in a giant pile of memories
soaked and soggy from the rain
but still the little people have faith
and those dwarfs and midgets
so as we stare into the blue
remembering that fearful night
we break down and cry.

If you like this check out my other jigsaw poem called "Bonus"

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  • 16 years ago

    by Sora

    Well, i must say you did a wonderful job with putting those words in to a poem.
    it was beautiful and truthful.
    i really loved every word!
    wonderful write.
    5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by Grace

    I loved it =p

  • 16 years ago

    by robin milford

    I agree that is a interesting game I suggest we play it in discussion board I bet it be fun

  • 16 years ago

    by Perfection

    Hmm interesting game youre playing there and you did a pretty good job on the words...

    Nicely done