Hahaha. i actually love this. i seriously started laughing... got some weird looks from some peoples but thats typical. lolz.

Coz all girls want, is money and security,
They'll wear white dresses, but hunny, it's impurity

haha. sad but true. i love this line.
i really like the way u write. no percise definition. no guidelines. just whatever u want. but ne ways. i should go... the weird looks r back cuz im typing like the maniac that i am. lolz. keep writing. ur really great. 5/5.

yours always
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