by Riley Jan 7, 2008
category :
Life, society /
about society
When the earth takes back its mountains |
by Absinth Eyes
Nicely done. =) |
by Teria
Oh my gosh, darling. |
by Rhiannon
You have a very distinct voice. I really enjoyed this poem. |
I like the vocabulary and the quesyions you posed the in poem, but I think the flow was a little jumpy, and all the lines were different lengths. I think the poem would also look more neat and organized if you put it into stanzas instead of just all together. I like the comparison between natural earth and the media, too. |