Well done dear..Flows perfectly and i liked the smoothness probably coz they ryme pretty well all throughout the poem..

Nice portrayal of anger too, loved it..

I feel like this about my ex. He was constanly accusing me of things I wasn't doing, he never told me he loved me until I ended it but I knew it was a lie. 5/5, Em

So touching peom
excellent job , nothing more to add
5/5

This is really good.! i loved it. and it reminded me of my dumb x. Then they come back and ask for forgiveness as if we are just going to hand it to them.
Well done i loved the rhythm and everything! :)

5/5
-Tania :)