Someone elses war

by A girl broken until   Jan 8, 2008


Bullet shot through the head,
Never knew you were really dead,
all the shots you led astray,
all the tears that day,
Left alone to die,
how many people are gonna cry?
Rain pelts on,
covering the body,
of a soldier,
fighting a war he didnt start.

A mother asks the world why,
her sons not coming home,
a father lost in memories of baseball,
a sister sits alone and cries,
his best friend watched him die,
a mother asks the world why,
her son died fighting someone Elses war.

he was only seventeen,
underage yet still so keen,
black hair with a golden sheen,
died for his country,
thought fighting was the only way,
died so we could live today.

Families pray for safe return,
now hope for safe journey,
starting to believe in hell,
wishing for a heaven,
memories burn that the heart,
eventually fade away,
torn apart by truth,
kept together,
by lies and deceit.

The mother can barley breathe,
the father holds in a scream,
the sister slowly forgets how to dream,
the best friend learns to cry,
all torn from the broken life.

Belief begins to fade,
as legions fight for life,
tears form yet never fall,
no one backs out just stand tall,
they were supposed to be brave,
fight for truth,
when in actual fact,
the war was all a lie.

Mothers around the world cry,
always asking why,
fathers fight confusion of fading memories,
sisters find it hard not to cry,
best friends fall in battle,
fighting the same war,
they didnt start.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Gem

    Oo.. wanted to tear up for a minute there

    "rain pelts on,
    covering the body,
    of a soldier,
    fighting a war he didnt start."

    Such strong words... really gets the point across!

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Saving Grace

    Sooo sad, but very powerfull. amazingly written. keep it up 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Cliche Fairytale Ending

    Really good poem i can relate my dads fightin gin iraq

  • 16 years ago

    by Just Jade

    Hey laurenzo ... i love writing aabout war ... i wrote my english paper in yr 9 on an old man reminniscing in the past about war ... i think that war evokes such powerful emotions and anyone can foirm those emotions into such a beautiful poem than your a wonderful writer

  • 16 years ago

    by PygmyPuff

    Oh jeeze. The first line is soooo strong. its like POW. (literally). The rhyme scheme is complicated yet followed out lovely. Its amazing. I love it