by A girl broken until Jan 8, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
Bullet shot through the head, |
by Gem
Oo.. wanted to tear up for a minute there |
by Saving Grace
Sooo sad, but very powerfull. amazingly written. keep it up 5/5 |
Really good poem i can relate my dads fightin gin iraq |
by Just Jade
Hey laurenzo ... i love writing aabout war ... i wrote my english paper in yr 9 on an old man reminniscing in the past about war ... i think that war evokes such powerful emotions and anyone can foirm those emotions into such a beautiful poem than your a wonderful writer |
by PygmyPuff
Oh jeeze. The first line is soooo strong. its like POW. (literally). The rhyme scheme is complicated yet followed out lovely. Its amazing. I love it |