It so sad.... like a song........ coming from the boy.
I hope this isnt a true poem, its so sad

Oh jeeze. The first line is soooo strong. its like POW. (literally). The rhyme scheme is complicated yet followed out lovely. Its amazing. I love it

Hey laurenzo ... i love writing aabout war ... i wrote my english paper in yr 9 on an old man reminniscing in the past about war ... i think that war evokes such powerful emotions and anyone can foirm those emotions into such a beautiful poem than your a wonderful writer

Really good poem i can relate my dads fightin gin iraq

Sooo sad, but very powerfull. amazingly written. keep it up 5/5

Oo.. wanted to tear up for a minute there

"rain pelts on,
covering the body,
of a soldier,
fighting a war he didnt start."

Such strong words... really gets the point across!

5/5