Its writen good but i hate it. i hate wut it says and how much pain u r in!!!!

Its very well written, but the length was kinda... too much! I think it would've been more effective if it was shorter. I don't like cutting poems :( But it was good.

Awesome poem! Way to go on this one. I loved the emotion. You have real talent, dont ever waste that!

-xx-

5/5

Dude that was kinda dark, I liked it alot though. nice job. 5*

It was a good poem but I think your message was not wrote tightly you had alot of good idea but nothing to really make it flow good images those keep trying Plot121

So magnificent,.i love reading it,5/5