by ItsYou ItsAlwaysBeenYou Jan 8, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Every once in a while |
I like it, I like the flow, and how it's set up. |
by keithnwv
Young or old we all have things we hide away in our hearts and minds. We can never know what someone else is going through. I have been surprised by some of the feelings hidden inside people i know. As they would be surprised by mine if i let my guard down. Ultimately, there comes a time when you have to decide whether to lock it away forever or let them out. I wish i could do the latter but its not easy to do. I can relate very much to your words. |
by Sora
Awhh wow! i loved this poem! very detailed, yet sadd. but all and all it was great =] |
by Lori
This is good! Short and simple! I would have liked it a bit more if it didnt have as many "how"s ...but its still great.. the hows show your creativity so i'm def not gunna crush it because i love it! lol great job! >3 |
by HvN
I would have to say this one is my favorite, it's full of emotion! I can definitley relate, great job! |