Comments : The Ultimate Hurt

  • 16 years ago

    by The Queen

    Nice poem..i like the flow of the last stanza..

  • 16 years ago

    by Caitie B

    This is a really good poem =]]] keep it upp

  • 16 years ago

    by MyEscape

    You know I'm not looking for your 'just enough'

    That was a really great line you used! I think the whole piece has a good flow and rhyme to it along with an easy to relate to message.
    *ME*

  • 16 years ago

    by Sharon

    Really good poem. And your right don't settle till you find the real thing. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Millions

    Thank you guys so much!!! this means alot :)

  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    Lovely. <3 and yes, i like the view. :P

  • 16 years ago

    by Millions

    Sorry... dont quite get the whole "like the view thing"????

  • 13 years ago

    by momopixie18

    I'll put my lingerie on and prance around,
    In front of the mirror, where you can't be found
    I'll turn the radio up & scream out the words
    -haha great imagery, sounds like a great form of therapy.

    Now everything i am, is no longer yours,
    I'm taking me back, and closing the doors
    --i like this because its strongly said

    good job