Pretty good piece of work... keep posting more... I have some dark poetry like this.... Think it's called "Light in the Darkness"

Like this alot good job can realate 5/5

Love this poem, lol how i feel. wish it went longer tho, enjoying your poems heaps.

Wow this is really good i like it alot and it explains very much its deffently true...i'm actreally one that lives more in there head then in the world and at times it does suck but others its good...love the poem 5/5

Well it was a good poem, I hope you made it longer though. Anyway keep up the good work. Thanks for the comment.

I have to say that you think beyond imagination wow this one is very good