by shamvi Jan 8, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
secret love
He's like all the pretty things |
by Someone
It is sad, but I can feel how much you care. Great visionry, keep up the good work. |
U r good keep it up! Go after him! |
by Marc Ortiz
Once again it was a good poem, I think to improve this you should use punctuations :) (it's just a suggestion) flow was smooth, keep up the good work. |
If you love him go for him. seeing from afar will hurt you more... |
by Bekka Smekka
Sad, and i know how it feels to love another but not be loved in return. well done :) |