Hey

i think this poem was amazing!

i read it and was turned off by the length then something held me there to read it.

thank god i did becuase that was a truely amazing poem!!

chloe

xxx

Cathy
I hate seeing you so sad. I hope things start getting better for you soon.
Take Care
Cindy

This is truly a heartbreaking piece.. Although very sad it was a joy to read. Full of heartfelt emotion, the sorrow and pain was felt the whole way thought. I agree with Eric it does sound like your ready to let go. I hope this is the case as i truly would love to read a happy and joyful poem from you.... If you don't me saying.. I love your work Cathy and hope to one day read a poem with joy from you.

Writing helps me move on. i hope it will for you too!!! better days are ahead. take care

"Im left to sink as I await the moments ahead
replaying the past and every word we've said
wondering how I can ever go on
now that my dreams are finally gone"
this last stanza is a fantastic finish to a great and sad poem. I enjoyed reading it :)
reall missed ur poems :))

Its tough but event ho its hard keep smiling :) and again another beautifully touching poem :)

A wonderfull theme to write on :) i enjoyed reading this poem 5/5