I loved it. 5/5 =D

Now this poem is beautifully written. It shows a lot of emotion, but in the first stanza second line, it doesn't sound right. I like the poem a lot though cause it shows a lot of feeling. Good job!

.:CiNdY:.

Desire. A powerful sensation that takes over your heart and if that desire is not fulfilled... lonliness seeps through. Wonderfully done here. *5/5*