"These are fragile times we're living in
and i think I'm falling apart
piece by piece I'm barely hanging on
and I'll watch myself
I'll watch it all slip away
out of my grasp
out of my reach"

that was my favourite part :)

i didn't see anything wrong with it 5/5.

This poem is reali good... i like it =]
5/5 keep up the good work..