"We always used to say forever,
but forever faded after awhile"
that was my favourite part.

just a few careless mistakes
"i used to be my superman,
now you're my kryptonite.
everything is seems has hit the fan"

i think it should be "you used to be my superman,"
and
"eveything it seems has hit the fan"

anyway, other than that it was great
5/5